"standing by" by CP

My controlling purpose of Standing By is to grab a attention from the audience to see the reality of the world that we might not able to see anywhere, and Standing by is a good example of the world itself and the people. People shows what they really are when they are pressured by frustration and anger.

Reflecting on Revision

When I read other student's essay, I like the introduction where she says, "We live in a society where people are judged for any and everything." That is a good beginning where the readers will continue to read, the best audience for this is people who has been judged, discriminated, or judging others. I think she is kind of student that lives in racially life where she has been judged by who she is, and her color skin. She even tells that "Sedaris writes in a sarcastic, witty tone" she actually focus on his tones of how he writes, and how he describes people in the airport.
 My essay, honestly is not done, I wish I had a time to finish it. I think I did good just need a better introduction to make the readers continue reading. I think I have describe almost specifically what Sedaris wrote, but wish I could describe it better.

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