When I read other student's essay, I like the introduction where she says, "We live in a society where people are judged for any and everything." That is a good beginning where the readers will continue to read, the best audience for this is people who has been judged, discriminated, or judging others. I think she is kind of student that lives in racially life where she has been judged by who she is, and her color skin. She even tells that "Sedaris writes in a sarcastic, witty tone" she actually focus on his tones of how he writes, and how he describes people in the airport.
My essay, honestly is not done, I wish I had a time to finish it. I think I did good just need a better introduction to make the readers continue reading. I think I have describe almost specifically what Sedaris wrote, but wish I could describe it better.
I like that you identify what you liked about the other student's paper. That's important for deciding how you want to write your essay.
ReplyDeletePerhaps assignment four will help you write your essay and explain your thoughts better. That assignment (and the one called "choices") really ask you to explain why you think Sedaris is making writerly choices. Relating that to your own thoughts is really what the interpretive essay is all about.